On my descriptive essay, I wrote about an old country house that has belonged to my family for decades it belonged to my great grandmother and it was passed on to her children and so on. What motivated me to write about that house was that I wanted to describe something that brought me peace and those good memories. The last time I went to that house was to visit my aunt who passed away last year and she was the one who used to live there after all her siblings decided to go to live in the city. The place where the house is located in a really beautiful tropical landscape which characterizes not only my family because of its beauty or its wild but my country.

Through the essay, I organized my ideas by first describing the house in the outside so my audience could get a picture of it. Then described the house from the inside so my audience feels a sense as they were there. Lastly, I describe the beautiful oasis where the house is located. I chose to write it that way because every time I went there the first thing that captured my attention was the small blue house that stood out to me because it was surrounded only by trees. Then I used to go on the inside o leave my things and explored the house on the inside because even though it never changes every time I went there it made me appreciate more what I had so I wanted my audience to feel as they were me while I was describing the house. I considered my audience by writing as many sensory details as I could since I wanted them to feel the same peace that I felt when I was there.

The peer review in this essay was key for me to know if my audience confused or if they needed more details. Throughout my peer review, I noticed that my audience was kind of confused with some details that I had in my first paragraph. There I came to noticed that I had misspelled a word throughout the whole essay.

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